This one did have a pretty solid start, and a solid soundtrack, but I needed to add a deep story, and I also needed to do some tweaking on it!!!
This one did have a pretty solid start, and a solid soundtrack, but I needed to add a deep story, and I also needed to do some tweaking on it!!!
Well, I see that this was not for the purpose of making it serious, but for the purpose of making a quick comedy, so I think that in the next one, you return to this concept and make it something serious, because that way I see that it has some power to make it drama!!!
there was so much randomness in this one, it made this one very short apparently, but that is if the animation was something simple and very solid and basic!!!
It really was early blockhead design, so this was a really good way to see where this quirky yellow character came from!!!
nothing bad animated in fact, but I notice that it is somewhat choppy, so next time do better!!!
very, very great were the effects, but the movements were too much but well done, so all good this!!!
very good things you have done, really very solid was this!!!
oh wow the ending was truly a gem and a true legend!!!
well, the animation and styling was very good, but the problem here that the sequences were running very slow, but the whole work in general was quite solid!!!
Oh .. nice. Thanks a lot for your feedback.
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I hope to improve on my animation.
Thanks again
well, the style and animation was fine, but i noticed that you could have added more movement to the characters!!!
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